ext_4071 ([identity profile] laurie-ky.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_episodefic 2008-07-31 01:17 pm (UTC)

I really liked this story. I liked how you had John making a connection to the show and his introspection. How he's struggling to connect more with Ronan, but uncomfortable about being as open as Hutch and Starsky.
Your voices were right on for John and Rodney. Good Job.

Laurie

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